A&R1986: Eternity Smith

Eternity Smith (1986) #1-5 by Dennis Malonee, Rick Hoberg and others

This is Renegade’s first (and I think only) colour book. And it’s a kinda-sorta super-hero book (well, it’s got a guy running around in leotards who has (augmented) powers, so I think it counts).

Both are unusual things for Renegade to be publishing… and it’s also a strange time to be launching a series like this, as it’s in the middle of the Black and White Boom period.

But perhaps things will become clearer after reading the first three pages:

The text seems to hint at this being a continuation of something? Which is seldom a good way to start off a series like this… and it isn’t, I think?

The “artwork” is by Hoberg, but the “rendering” is by Tim Burgard. I guess that’s a roundabout way of saying that Burgard is the inker?

The colours (by Janice Cohen) are competent and professional-looking, but the artwork looks rather basic.

“D-daddy?” Hm.

“And you are a man. I can see that.” Is she saying that his leotard is a bit tight in the crotch? I’m just saying that this father/daughter banter is really odd.

But everything here is odd.

“That woman seems a likely candidate for physical abuse.” I’m with that guy: “What?”

The lines seem like they’re coming from an alternate dimension where everything is weird and awkward.

“You are vermin!. All of you!”

So this series had originally been a pitch to Eclipse Comics, and reading between the lines (you have to use a microscope), I’m guessing Dean Mullaney passed on it? So somehow Deni Loubert ended up with it.

But Eclipse did publish Champions, also written by Malonee, and it sucked.

Note to people who want to add a mystery to their books: So we’ve been given that this mysterious Tesseract character is a woman, so it has to be one of the female characters in this book. There are exactly three of them: Smith’s daughter and wife, and the wife of his arch nemesis. So it’s obviously either his wife or his daughter coming from the future to save them.

Here’s the note: Add more plausible suspects for more mysterious mysteries.

We get a bunch of essays on various sciency things, and they’re not bad. But the first one is kinda milketoastey.

I can’t stress how bizarre this book is enough. So the arch nemesis is using his own wife as a hostage… and then Smith calls his bluff… and the nemesis goes “You’re of use to me now!” to his wife.

Oh, and the black bodyguard is called “Kung”.

What? “Running boards”? This is a running board:

She’s standing in the middle of the seat there, isn’t she? What? What?

… Oh, he’s saying that she would have preferred to stand on the running board instead of “among […] her crew”?

What?

Well, OK, so that’s kinda amusing? But it means that Tesseract has to be the daughter.

The mystery revealed next issue!

Er… Oh daddy?

OK, paper dolls.

What the fuck is this.

Hah! Tesseract is the daughter! I’m so smart S M R T.

*puke*

A sixth issue is announced, but was never published. But, as you can see, it was meant to be the final issue at Renegade, and then the series would go to a different publisher… which turns out to be Hero Comics. Somehow I’ve bought a couple issues of that (but not the first one, which I surmise finished up the first storyline). This is a blog series about Renegade, but I might as well take a look at the Hero Comics issues I have:

Wow. It looks totally different! Did they swap out everybody?

But no, it’s just a new inker, E. R. Cruz (and a new colourist). It definitely looks like Cruz has redrawn everything, and it’s now in a Spanish lush style. Looks great.

They don’t actually fuck, though.

Cruz is gone the next issue, so we’re back to the normal barely competent rendering.

So: Eternity Smith is really, really odd, and while it’s not totally without qualities, it’s pretty bad.

Hero Comics published nine issues. It looks like a reprinting was attempted in 2017, but was abandoned after two issues?

Mark Waid writes in Amazing Heroes #98, page 46:

According to Hoberg, Eternity Smith
was originally pitched to DC Com-
ics. “I would like to have worked
with them on this, and they said they
wanted to option it, but, after talk-
ing with Deni [Loubert, Renegade
publisher] awhile, we hit it off real
well. We decided to go with Rene-
gade, and now we have total creative
control.”
Hoberg and Mallonee had been
planning to do something together
for many years. “We’ve known each
other for quite a while, and it just
happened that when we got to do
something together last year, which
was an Iron Man story, I found that
we were just terrific together. We’re
an odd couple at best—we have com-
pletely different personalities and
beliefs, but we jell wonderfully on
comics.” They decided that they
wanted to collaborate, and made
time for a brainstorming session that
went outstandingly well.

[…]

“The basic genesis for this idea
is one that I’ve been interested in for
quite a while and Dennis likes it too:
What if a character like Buck Rogers
came back to his own time and had
to pick up his old life?”

Somebody writes in Amazing Heroes #144, page 83:

Eternity Smith is one of those books
that goes in cycles. It started out as
a well put-together project, nicely
written and nicely drawn, with a
fascinating» concept behind it. The
first six issue run, readers were never
sure when (or if) an issue was going
to come out, from what company, and
whether the quality was going to stay
consistent. By the time the sixth part
came out, finishing off the first story,
I had lost interest, and couldn’t
remember what was going on.

[…]

This issue Tesseract, who may or
may not be the incarnation of Skylark
Smith (Ethan’s daughter) in the
future, returns to the past, seemingly
intent on killing her father. To make
matters worse, Skylark herself seems
intent on committing incest with
daddy, who is only slightly older than
she is!

[…]

The scripting of the issue is fairly
tight, although the dialogue tends to
be a little stilted at times. Perhaps
what is most bothersome about the
book is the incestuous nature of
Skylark Smith. This issue she sings
a specially written love song to her
father, while caressing his chest.
Everyone is unnerved (rightfully so),
and I got a sense of deja vu of the
Champions. Mallonee acknowledges
sexuality in his world (something
most writers and companies won’t),
but doesn’t anyone in his world have
a normal, healthy sexual relationship?
The art is weak in places, although
functional as a whole. Burgard and
McClellan do seem to have a problem
with facial structure that could be
worked on. Their anatomy and
scenery are fine, but their faces are
a little distorted at times, and Archie-
like at others.

Russell Freund writes in The Comics Journal #112, page 43:

Want to see what happens when a renegade
tries to run with the pack? Pick up the first
issufe of Eternity Smith, now available from
Renegade press. Other Renegade titles are
black-and-white and pricey; Eternity Smith
is in full color, priced to sell at a buck and
a quarter. Most Renegade titles are small
press projects, hard to classify; Eternity Smith
is costumed action/adventure with zap guns
and ‘bots, and other kiddie sci-fi stuff. It’s
the kind of thing First does all of the time,
but First’s books usually have some kind of
flair. Eternity Smith is just barely compe-
tent.

[…]

I admit that this isn’t the sort of book that
appeals to me much, even when really well
done. But this book is so flat, predictable,
and ordinary that even if it were an example
of the sort of book I loved, I wouldn’t like
it. For one thing, Skylark Smith is ridicu-
lous. She is supposed to be the leader of
some sort of all-purpose assault squad. As
a cover, they book themselves into clubs as
a pop music group. Great idea. Undercover
agent, seeking anonymity, becomes pop star.
I suppose it could be played for comedy,
with the crack team of agents working as
a sleazy, incompetent lounge act, but Eter-
nity Smith is the kind of kiddie book where
the heroine has to be absolutery great at
everything, so we get to have her touchy-
feely song lyrics quoted to us at length, and
we get pictures of people in the audience
having movements in their souls, and pic-
tures of Skylark, mike in hand, as • ‘she
glories in the raw emotion Of the song…
and, once on stage, she loses herself in it,
and in the adulation of the throng.” If
you’ve always wished you could leally buy
all of the Dazzler’s records, or if the idea of
Sheena Easton finishing up a set and dash.
ing off to thwart nuclear terrorists sounds
plausible to you, then this might be just
your cup of weewee.

[…]

As for the art, those of you who just can’t
get enough of Rich Buckler will be thriled
to know Rick Hoberg’s still working. Actu-
ally, Hoberg has his virtues. He presents the
essential action in each panel cleanly and
clearly, and he varies the angle and point
of view from panel to panel with admirable
fluidity. But his drawing and composition
have the familia’r cheerful blandness of the
modern hero book. It’s not bad work, and
it certainly isn’t amateurish, but it’s sterile
and it’s tame, adjectives I would never
dream Of applying to a Kirby or a Ditka.
It has no personality beyond the chipper
efficiency of the mid ’80s costumed adven-
ture book, available at newsstands every-
where.
But isn’t that what’s intended? I get the
feeling this book turned out exactly as Rene
gade wanted it to. Eternity Smith is a totally
commercial product born of the coldest
calculation. Look, the Renegade people
have ambitions too. like to own
houses, nice cars, take swank vacations.
Why should they be content to squat in the
9mall press ghetto, sending out little stacks
of quirky books, to an audience that may
or may not be there? We are living in the
haveit.all ’80s. Let ’em get a little fun out
of life.

I was unable to find anybody on the interwebs that discussed Eternity Smith.

This blog post is part of the Renegades and Aardvarks series.

Comics Daze

It’s a nice day for reading comics. And I could listen to… hm… Yeah! I’ll listen to a lot of Bowie. It’s a Bowie kind of day.

David Bowie: Space Oddity

06:02: I Wish I Could Say “Thank You” by Yukari Takinami (Fanfare/Ponent Mon)

So this book is about the artist’s mother dying from pancreatic cancer.

I’m having some problems with the chronology here — things seem a bit messy, but that’s probably a conscious choice. The translation is somewhat wonky — the medical terms don’t seem to be quite the right ones often?

The ending was quite moving, though. Not the bit where the mother died, which was very matter of fact — to an almost bizarre degree. But the very last pages.

David Bowie: Hunky Dory

06:59: In Your Next Life You Will Be Together With All Your Friends by Anders Brekhus Nilsen

Oh, I’d forgotten that I had ordered this… that’s the nice thing about comics that take longer time than probably planned — it arrives out of the blue as an unexpected gift.

This is a collection of odds and ends (mostly published before), and some sketchbook stuff.

These kinds of things usually don’t work that well as a reading experience, but this one really coheres: The pieces seem to complement each other and grow into a larger thing somehow.

I love it, and I also love the thingness of the book — with the different paper stocks and the insets and stuff, it’s just a very satisfying object.

David Bowie: The Rise and Fall of Ziggy Stardust and the Spiders From Mars

07:24: The Thud by Mikaël Ross (Fantagraphics)

Lovely artwork, and it’s a ten-hankie story.

The pacing is a bit odd… but it’s a really strong book.

David Bowie: Aladdin Sane

08:09: Joe Frank: Ascent by Jason Novak (Fantagraphics)

I like these texts a lot. Very funny and sometimes affecting.

I’m assuming these texts already existed, and this is an adaptation? (It’s against my religion to read the text on the back covers of books (or introductions).) I’m not sure the illustrations bring a lot to these texts… but… it’s still a good book.

David Bowie: Diamond Dogs

08:57: The Strange by Jérôme Ruillier (Drawn & Quarterly)

I like the storytelling approach here — it’s a chorus of people recounting their encounters with “the strange” (i.e., an immigrant).

But it also feels really uncomfortable, because he remains a cipher who seemingly has no agency (or personality) of his own. All we get is what other people (and a bird) observes.

So it’s a bit “eh?”, but the mood conveyed by these pages is impeccable.

David Bowie: David Live (1)

09:22: The Golden Age by Roxanne Moreil & Cyril Pedrosa (First Second)

The graphic technique here is astounding — it looks like everything has been screenprinted. But I guess Pedrosa is just going hog wild with layers in Photoshop.

I get exhausted just by looking at it, though: It looks so labour intensive.

The storyline is… I guess… a kinda post-Game of Thrones kinda thing? It’s got a bewildering number of characters, and there’s plenty of intrigue and murder. But no sex or torture, which makes it less Game of Thronesian. It’s pretty good? I guess I’ll be getting the second volume, too.

David Bowie: David Live (2)

10:20: Heritage Awesomes Silicon Session Prototype V 6.0 by Carson Grubaugh and Dave Sim

I guess this is a parody of a Heritage auction catalogue or something? Never having seen one, I guess I’m missing how hilariously funny the parody is.

Perhaps.

In any case, this is part of a fundraiser for Grubaugh to finally release The Strange Death of Alex Raymond? It’s a pretty handsome book, although I have to admit I didn’t actually read that much of it… perhaps there’s a ton of hilarity here… or just more “comics metaphysics”, which is (as far as I can tell) Sim’s version of what the rest of us call “random things”.

But here’s Grubaugh’s version of Ironheart, the Riri Williams super-hero from Marvel.

David Bowie: Station to Station

10:58: Min vilje, din lov by Bo Torstensen (Bogfabrikken)

This is a Danish comic from 1994 — and there wasn’t that many of them around that time (except for comics aimed at children). This one feels really ambitious, even if it’s basically just a very, very convoluted mystery.

Torstensen is obviously very influenced by Tardi: The panel placement, the tone, the views of the city… but the linework and the characters look nothing like Tardi, and the characters are pretty… bizarre? I mean, look at the two women in the lower right panel: They look like they a meter tall or something.

These pages are so busy that it’s difficult to interpret them immediately… and the story is also oddly paced. But it’s an interesting artefact to find; kinda thrilling — like something from a parallel universe. Unfortunately, he just did four albums, and he’s now apparently working for Lego.

David Bowie: Low

12:01: Nobody Likes You, Greta Grump by Cathy Malkasian (Fantagraphics)

This is super-duper cute.

I laughed and I cried. Thumbs up.

David Bowie: “Heroes”

12:31: The Crossroads at Midnight by Abby Howard (Iron Circus)

Uh-oh. Another book from Iron Circus… I think I’ve read several books from then in a row that have been pretty dire… Well, let’s see.

Wow, that’s really nice artwork. It kinda reminds me of Scott McCloud when he was doing those lush black and white issues of Zot… only better.

The storytelling, though, is rough. After having read a couple dozen pages I started flipping back and forth to check whether the pages had been printed out of order, and then I theorised that the pages with black borders were a flashback, and then I wondered whether those were supposed to be the “real world” while the white-bordered pages are fantasy, and then I gave up and kept on reading.

And then it ends! I thought this was one long story, but this is a collection of stories? Horror stories? Geeze. And the next story starts with a woman finding a grody mattress on the streets? How much does a mattress cost anyway?

I think I’d rather sleep on the floor than on mattress I’ve found on the street, really.

But, OK, after my readjustment… These are really good horror stories! And more gruesome than you’d expect.

Howard is really talented.

David Bowie: Welcome to the Blackout (Live London ’78) (1)

13:21: Š! #38 (Kuš)

It’s been a couple years since I last read Š!… I used to have a subscription, but that lapsed, and I forgot to renew it or something.

This isn’t the strongest issue I’ve read — most of the pieces seem really slight, but there’s a couple good ones in here (as seen above).

David Bowie: Welcome to the Blackout (Live London ’78) (1)

13:34: Power Pack #4 by Ryan North, Nico Leon, Rachelle Rosenberg and others (Marvel)

This isn’t firing on all cylinders…

… but it’s still pretty amusing.

David Bowie: Welcome to the Blackout (Live London ’78) (1)

13:49: Wiccan and Hulkling #1 by Howard/Vecchio/Grundetjern and others (Marvel)

So, I know nothing about this “King in Black” nonsense…

… but it’s a bunch of Venoms? Fine, fine; no problem. But the book is such a mishmash of scenes that go nowhere… it’s a very frustrating read.

And the artwork does nothing for me.

David Bowie: Welcome to the Blackout (Live London ’78) (2)

14:06: Maids by Katie Skelly (Fantagraphics)

This is really good!

It’s got a compulsive readability thing going on.

David Bowie: Lodger

14:22: 2024 by Ted Rall (NBM)

I like Ted Rall. Or at least his drawing style: Those wonky faces and those thick/thin lines. Even the lettering is appealing to me.

But this is so overwritten that there’s hardly room for any artwork.

It’s been a long while since I’ve read Nineteen Eighty-Four, and I didn’t realise until halfway through that Rall was doing a scene by scene … parody? of it. I mean, it was clear from the first page that this was a riff on it, but I thought that is was more general and less specific… but then we really do get a scene by scene version of it, down to being tortured by having to watch channel 101, which is the most boring nature channel ever (only about rats, you know).

I know! That sounds very funny indeed. But … it just feels badly edited. It’s like there is a really funny parody of the novel buried in here somewhere, but it’s hard to sift through this for the gems.

David Bowie: Scary Monsters

15:45: The Abominable Mr. Seabrook by Joe Ollmann (Drawn & Quarterly)

This starts of well with a very condensed life of this guy…

… but then it turns out that that was just the introduction! And now the book starts and we’ll get those 15 pages expanded to 300? I was getting bored with the buy after the first 15 pages already!

I’ve never been so instantly turned off by a comic like this. Whoever came up with the idea for doing that recap of his life at the start?

This isn’t bad, but I find that I have absolutely no interest in this book, and I bailed at page 80. Just out of sheer boredom. But I suspect that people that like this sort of biography will like this book.

Perhaps it would have worked better without that introduction.

David Bowie: Ziggy Stardust And The Spiders From Mars (1)

16:49: Tuberculosis 2020 by Rikke Villadsen

This book is a homage to Munch. It’s a gorgeous little book — the reproduction of a sketchbook is great, and the colours are fabulous.

And it’s hilarious!

I love how she’s also reproducing the bleed-throughs from the original book. It’s sometimes disturbing, because the next page in this book isn’t always what we’re seeing the bleed-throughs of. If you follow my drift.

Anyway; it’s a wonderful little book.

David Bowie: Ziggy Stardust And The Spiders From Mars (2)

17:02: The Underground Sketchbook by Tomi Ungerer (Fantagraphics)

I guess if you were a hep cat in the mid 60s, you probably had this book, right?

It’s fine.

OK, I can feel myself fading… I think that’s enough comics for a day.

It’s was a very varied mix of stuff? And while there were a couple clunkers, it was mostly pretty spiffy.

A&R1986: Murder

Murder (1986) #1-3 edited by Robin Snyder

Another three months, another anthology from Robin Snyder. The first ones were centred on various Ditko bits that he apparently had lying around, but this one doesn’t mention Ditko at all on the cover. Let’s have a look at how the first issue starts:

Well, OK, there’s more Ditko, but that’s a strange way to start off an anthology. First an indicia-like page (with artwork by Erik Larsen), and then an in-house ad (presumably to make the Ditko story start on the right-hand page), and then a splash page… I mean, it’s an odd way to entice somebody browsing the racks of a comics store to buy your book.

That’s the Mysterious Traveller looking on to the ironic denouement of this story, isn’t it? So perhaps this was originally destined for a Carlton comic (before Carlton went bust)?

It’s a pretty loopy story, even as the Traveller stories go. Which is nice.

BIG HATE!

The title of this anthology is “Murder”, so you’d think there’d be some thematic unity here, but — it’s just the normal mishmash of random stuff that Snyder had access to. So you get one almost surreally unfunny Henry Boltinoff page per issue…

… and the longest piece in the issue is by Brad Foster (!) of mini-comics fame… but it’s an illustrated text piece about some mummies and stuff. I have to admit to bailing before I got halfway through. But the artwork’s nice.

All three issues have an adaptation of an Edgar Allen Poe story, all adapted by Rich Margopoulos and artwork by Dan Day… but with different inkers/finishers. So here we have Bark Summers, and … it looks a bit wonky, doesn’t it?

This is so random! Sudden page by Alex Toth about how people have unsymmetrical faces!

And then this back cover page by Ernie Colón, which…. is it an ad for something? I assumed it was a preview of something in the next issue, but nope.

It’s just a nice illustration Colón had in a drawer somewhere?

The randomness of Murder makes it charming in a way.

The first issue was stealthy on the subject, but the second one says so explicitly: This is really Revolver #11.

Dan Day does the inking himself on the second Poe story, and it looks more striking.

Jed Corby/Leo Summers does an O. Henry sci fi story… it’s got an interestingly scratchy quality to some of the panels, but it’s somewhat amateurish.

I have no idea who this is by (it doesn’t say so anywhere in the issue, I think?), and it’s…. kinda cute?

Ditko does a very strange “deal with the devil” story — it’s odd because here the devil seems to renege on his deals all the time, and is very interested in… burning down plants…

Allan Petersen brings the philosophy, and David Day joins his brother on the Poe adaptation, bringing a lusher, almost Corben-like sheen to it.

Ditko does a two-pager where the miscreant goes free for once. Very unusual. But I guess that’s why it’s called “Social Justice”, because Ditko doesn’t believe in the concept.

And then we get Wally Wood! With Nick Cuti and Ernie Colón… so was this an old, unfinished piece that the other two completed? There’s no contextualising whatsoever of the contents here.

Snyder likes. Talk. Short sentences.

So… the randomness of what’s in here gives this a strange readability, but it’s not actually… you know… good.

I was unable to find any reviews of Murder on the interwebs.

This blog post is part of the Renegades and Aardvarks series.

A&R1986: Ms. Tree Summer Special

Ms. Tree Summer Special (1986) #1 by Max Allan Collins, Terry Beatty and Gary Kato

I covered the main run of Ms. Tree here, but there’s a couple of specials to mop up. This is the first one: The Rock’n’Roll Summer Special.

We’re into the days of the Black and White Boom, and Deni Loubert is getting worried — as she had reasons to be, because the subsequent bust ended Renegade. Anyway, here’s the first three pages of this comic:

The main Ms. Tree series used a single colour (in addition to the black, of course), but used two different tones of that colour… for the first dozen? issues, and then Beatty just did a single flat colour (because that’s less work). Here, we have the blue in duotone, and then a second colour (brown) used in a single shade. Looks pretty good?

I got pretty fed up with Ms. Tree while reading the main series in a marathon reading session, so I’m surprised at how much I liked getting back into it. Not that there’s anything outstanding about this (fourteen page) story — but it’s pretty entertaining? It’s like encountering a friend you didn’t know you had missed?

Beatty’s er action scenes are as awkward as ever.

The rest of the issue doesn’t deal with Ms. Tree at all. First off we have a long piece (from 1983, apparently) about Bobby Darin. This had presumably been published somewhere before?

It’s really striking how different Beatty’s artwork looks here (without the Gary Kato assists). It’s obviously based on photo reference a lot, and the sheer stiff awkwardness of it all takes into a different sphere: It’s pretty cool. It’s almost kinda punk?

But… Bobby Darin? I’m not sure I’ve ever heard any of his stuff. *pauses JPEGMAFIA playing on the stereo*

It’s kinda more croonerish than I had expected? But it’s got a kinda something going on, I guess…

Ah, a novelty hit… It’s all very pre-Beatles.

Sometimes the traced look of the artwork becomes a bit much. But it’s told pretty well, I guess.

Darin movied with the times…

OK, I can unpause JPEGMAFIA now, or…

No! Then we get the story of Collins’ own 60s garage band. It’s a pretty interesting story… I wonder whether they’re also on Youtube?

Hey! That’s kinda cool! It’s got a charming garage feel to it.

It’s good! I’m shocked.

And then we round out the issue with some versions of Ms. Tree by other artists.

So! That was a quirky collection of stuff, and I remember some letter writers being dissatisfied with the low Ms. Tree content level here, but I found it to be a most satisfactory read.

*unpauses JPEGMAFIA on the stereo*

I was unable to find any reviews of this comic on the web tubes.

This blog post is part of the Renegades and Aardvarks series.

A&R1986: The Puma Blues

The Puma Blues (1986) #1-23 by Stephen Murphy and Michael Zulli

Oh! This is a series I remember well from when I was a teenager. That is, I don’t remember much of the specifics, but I remember the pensive atmosphere and the sight of those manta rays floating in the sky.

It used to be you could ask anybody “which unfinished comic series do you wish they’d pick up again and finish?” and everybody would answer “Puma Blues”. (For some value of “everybody”.) It’s one of those comics where the publishing history really kinda has to be discussed as well, otherwise nothing much would make sense…

So! This is the first (and as it turned out, only) comic published by Aardvark One International. Dave Sim set up the company because he wanted to provide a venue for creators to publish stuff free from all editorial interference and stuff… and this was in the middle of the Imperial Years of Cerebus, where Sim was starting to become rather flush with money, so my guess is that he wanted to spread some of that around…

But let’s read the first six pages (because we really have to):

First of all… That’s the worst lettering ever! Second of all…

Whoa.

There’s so much going on here — we start off with a pretty oblique introduction from the creators, then an opening page with a scull out in a forest. Then we’re in the head of some hippie who seems to be all sensitive and stuff… who then gets out some pliers!? And … cuts off the ear lobe of some drunk? And then a smash cut to manta rays flying in the sky?

And the nature bits are exquisitely drawn, while the figure work is a bit dodgy, and…

If this isn’t the most intriguing way to start a comics series, I think it’s in the top ten? I guess you could quibble with the sensitive guy/ultraviolence schtick which has been done to death, but the pliers are just such an insane choice that it’s all kinda flabbergasting.

If there’s one immediate problem, it’s Zulli’s inconsistent rendering of people. We surmise from the caption that this is the same guy as in the opening pages, but there’s really nothing from the drawing that would even hint at that (beyond it being a thin, blond(e) guy, but then we don’t know if that’s just how Zulli draws people (spoilers: sure)).

I think you could also quibble with some of the storytelling choices: They withhold a lot of information (which is always fun), but when they give us information, it’s often in the form of internal monologues (or as here, a journal excerpt) that tells us about stuff… and in the context of the storytelling style, it feels a bit like cheating.

And the prose goes purple all the time.

But it’s mostly just absolutely on point: Ripping off storytelling ticks from the best of them (Chaykin/Miller/Lee).

“As you know, you’re a soldier and your name is Gavia” the robot helpfully tells the reader. I mean, that guy.

You can totally tell that he said “Fein” instead of “Fine” to her (her name is Fein).

Oops. That turned out very blurry. But it’s a shout out to Sue Coe, which is pretty cool.

Every issue has fun nature facts. I mean, depressing nature facts.

The first handful of issues are jam packed. The introductions don’t really talk about the comic itself much, and we then get 24 pages of storytelling. The way the narrative stands on its own feels really fresh and intriguing — it’s impossible to even guess at what they’re up to or where this is going.

And note the circulation numbers: 10K copies printed. Not bad, but not awesome, either.

I wondered whether they would re-letter these pages before doing the collected edition(s), but nope. It’s really quite horrible lettering in these early issues…

But the storytelling is on point: It just flows so naturally, pulling you into the milieu.

However, they make some a pretty odd choices, like having the protagonist watch a lot of VHS tapes made by his now-dead father.

The tapes are meant to be really heavy and interesting, but they seem to me to be the worst of all genres: American sound byte documentaries.

I hates it so much. I hates it!

And already here the first warning lights go off: It’s becoming clear that Murphy and Zulli are fans of “synchronicity”, or as normal people call it “random stuff happening”. It adds of so much depth and resonance when actions are somehow connected via various … things… Yes sir indeed.

But here it gets to be kinda moronic, because in this story, some Nazis set off a nuclear bomb in the Bronx in 1997… and as the father (here in a mask) explains… IT HAPPENED ON HITLER”S BIRTHDAY!!!1!!ONE!

Now, if you’re pointing out synchronicity in the real world, that’s fun, but here it’s… just… kinda silly.

For one bright issue, the circulation goes up to 19K… but this is during the height of the black and white boom, so my guess would be that a few stores had decided to “invest” heavily into the issue?

There’s so much here! This robot guy was the chauffeur to a rich older woman… but he felt like he had to run off into the woods, so he did. I don’t think we ever learnt what happened to the woman? Did she die in that car?

This is a harbinger of things to come.

These issues are quite brisk reading — there’s a lot of philosophy and nature scenes, and the amount of plotting isn’t overwhelming. But we get hints at greater conspiracies and stuff happening around the edges. It’s fun and intriguing.

Hm… is that the best promotional poster they could come up with?

This was a lovely issue — it’s almost all like this: We follow this puma around for a night. Zulli’s nature scenes are amazeballs.

Somebody asks the real questions, and they don’t really have an explanation.

Some of the storytelling ticks seem to make little sense, but they work in context, I think? For instance, the chauffeur robot had overheard a conversation between two guys, and now he’s repeating it to these birds (while moving around like a bird).

That’s more fun than watching those guys talk, right?

The circulation went down to 13K the issue after the 19K top, and then 12K, and then they stopped saying what the circulation is. Which I interpret as “it’s depressing; don’t ask”.

I assumed that “Bill Moulage” was an acronym for Murphy (doing a kinda-sorta William Burroughs thing), but he apparently exists?

Finally! The pliers are back! In a dream! Unfortunately that’s the last we see of them… ever… but it turns out that the protagonist used to wear ear rings (back in his hippie days), so perhaps there’s some sort of connection? As with most things in Puma Blues, it’s never resolved.

A reader expresses the common take on Puma Blues, I think.

They got a better promo poster.

OK, remember that “woo woo synchronicity” thing? Read these two pages:

CHERNOBYL MEANS WORMWOOD! LIKE FROM THE BIBLE! WELL I HAVE NEVER!

I mean… it’s fun, but like the protagonist says later: “Rosebud”.

Murphy/Zulli really likes this kind of stuff, while making fun of it, too, I think? Slightly? But you can see why Dave Sim would publish Puma Blues, because he’s all about these paranoid connections that shows that there’s “meaning” and “connection” in the world.

There isn’t much overt environmentalism in the storyline itself, but every issue has a lot of sad nature facts, and they sort of set up a clearing house for information about these issues…

Well now they’ve gone too far! They use a lot of quotes from pop music (mostly Talking Heads, David Bowie and Iggy Pop), and here they do Bowie again: But from his then-current album, which is his worst album ever. Tsk tsk.

I think this is the first time they’ve mentioned that Puma Blues is supposed to run for three years? At least that’s what I get from this…

Whoa. Gorgeous.

Zulli confirms it: They’re now one third through the narrative, and they’re done setting up plotlines and stuff.

So does things change with the 13th issue? Well… yes and no. Zulli’s artwork changes: He start using graytones. But we don’t really get any acceleration in the plot development…

Some people hate animals?

Then! Plot development! For one issue! It turns out that the displacement gun he’s using on the mantas is sending them to… China…? So this (Chinese?) woman, wearing a yin/yang symbol, which has resonance for the protagonist (we now see, but this hasn’t really been set up before, I think? or has it?), gets a baby manta ray from him, and… er…

I like it, but I guess we’re not meant to understand things too quickly.

The issues are now down to 20 pages of story and then four pages of letters and lots of news items.

*gasp* You could buy a page of Zulli artwork for $40. I wonder what they go for now…

Oh, well. That’s not too expensive.

The protagonist takes pictures, too.

So I think The Puma Blues was on a nice trajectory at this point… They’d set up the characters, introduced a lot of intriguing plot strands, established a fantastic milieu, and Zulli’s lettering is getting better… and then:

Dave Sim wanted to sell the trade paperback reprints of Cerebus via mail order only. Diamond Comics, the largest distributor, was mad about this (because they wanted in on the action). So Diamond, in “retaliation”, said that they were going to stop carrying Puma Blues.

This despicable move by Steve Geppi and William Schanes (basically “so you don’t wanna give us money? how about we break the legs of your friends, who have otherwise done nothing to offend us?”) naturally perturbed Murphy and Zulli. If Diamond went through with this extortion, they’d lose one third of their sales, and that means that Puma Blues would no longer be viable.

Diamond backed down after The Comics Journal got involved… but then… changed their minds again… until the Journal got involved again… but it meant that for months Murphy and Zulli had no idea whether Puma Blues was basically dead or not.

Did this affect their enthusiasm for the book or not? I think it’s pretty easy to tell: Things start unravelling. We do get a couple of issues that seem to advance the plot, but it’s somewhat confused (I don’t get why that guy with the stache (who’s a militant environmentalist, I think?) shot that poor manta ray. Just to find out if they were real or not? (He doesn’t go and collect the corpse.)

Zulli’s artwork improves every issue, though, so that’s nice. Perhaps because he uses more time per issue. Up until the Diamond nuclear threat, they’d done issues regular as clockwork: One per month. The schedule starts slipping now.

Diamond had also threatened to stop carrying all Vortex comics because Geppi was offended by Yummy Fur. So Bill Marks was going to set up a separate publishing company just for Yummy Fur, Fab Comics, and this is the only ad I’ve seen for that. (Diamond backed down here, too, and Marks continued publishing Yummy Fur under the Vortex banner.)

Murphy and Zulli are seem to be growing despondent, even if Diamond had backed down. But there’s gonna be a benefit issue.

Issues 18-20 do not mention “Aardvark One International” at all. Murphy would later write that those three issues were self-published, but apparently Sim did publish them as before.

Bud Plant writes in to say that he totally supports Diamond and Geppi, which surprised many at the time. Because people thought that Bud Plant was an upstanding, non-nutty guy. But then it turned out that Diamond bought Bud Plant’s distribution company some months later, which explains a lot.

Aardvark-Vanaheim was going to publish the Puma Blues collection, because Dave Sim wanted to divest himself of all responsibility as fast as possible (and to avoid having Puma Blues being used as a hostage against him again, perhaps?)

They bring aboard a professional letterer, Rob Caswell… and it’s odd how disturbing that looks. Sure, Zulli wasn’t the best letterer in the world, but this just looks … wrong!

Then there’s issue 20, which is the benefit issue. It’s 64 pages long, and the same price as all the previous issues (i.e., USD 1.70). Which makes me wonder who it benefits, exactly — surely this can’t be earning anybody any money? We get a couple of Puma Blues stories, like this one inked by Steve Bissette. It’s good!

Cool. A page by Chester Brown.

And then we get a retelling of the entire Aardvark/Diamond feud. It’s amazingly even-handed. If it were me, there would have been a lot more rancour… but on the other hand, Diamond would be distributing this issue, too, so… I’ll give you all for pages of it:

Geppi sounds like a total loon.

We get a whole bunch of pin-ups — here’s Timothy Truman and Dan Berger.

We get a longer story by David Roman, which looks like it was meant for something else, but is pretty apposite for Puma Blues.

Peter Laird and Kevin Eastman do a Ninja Turtles thing (sort of). Which makes me wonder whether this is a something that people pay a lot of money for now…

I guess?

Rick Veitch and Steve Bissette do a kinda cosmic jam thing.

All in all, it’s not a bad issue, as these things go. There’s even an Alan Moore-scripted thing in here.

So now surely the drama is over?

#21 is the first issue published by Mirage (the Turtle people), and more drama is happening. This time, Buddy Saunders, a Texas retailer, had dropped Puma Blues because he wanted to punish Dave Sim. And then he changed his mind, and then he continued to not carry Puma Blues because it just didn’t sell very much.

After talking to this asshole for hours, Murphy hand-sold him $12.75 worth of Puma Blues, and then decided that he was totally fed up with the entire fucking thing, it sounds like.

But what’s going on in the storyline, then? We apparently skip back in time to when the protagonist is a hippie again, and he goes on a trip around various sites where there’s been nuclear tests. It’s a slog to get through, and doesn’t seem to have anything at all to do with what’s gone before. I.e., it reads like if they were totally fed up with Puma Blues (and who can blame them after what’s happened the last year?) and wanted to do something else, but didn’t quite know what…

In the next issue, Murphy explains that this isn’t in the past, but in the future. Thank you, Caswell, for asking for an explanation.

Howard Cruse writes in and asks the real questions.

We even get a backup feature (by Walking Man Comics).

Is that still the same guy?

The final issue, #23, reads as if Murphy had gone on a tourist trip to a test site, and then just retells it (but layers Deep Philosophy and paranoia on top). It’s… it’s not very good.

Mirage published two collections of Puma Blues. The first is the first third, 1-12, and the second is just… the other issues? 13-19 doesn’t make much sense as a book.

Issue #24 was solicited, but was never published. A #24 1/2 is mentioned here and there…

But then:

In 2015, Dover published a complete collection, and got the creators to wrap up the series:

Unfortunately, the 36 added pages were all like this, and didn’t wrap up anything much.

None of the interesting, fun bits from the first dozen issues were touched upon at all, I think? Instead it’s just a … rant about … stuff that needs ranting about, but it’s kinda a “fuck you” to the readers. I mean, it’s not meant like that, I’m sure, but that it what it felt like reading the new ending.

Well, OK, there’s this: Two pages of pliers and manta rays, and that connects thing… sorta? But only in the vaguest way, symbolic way… And instead of going “ooo, it all connects”, these pages make me go “well, at least they tried?”

But I’m sure it was painful for the creators to return to this and try to resolve it somehow — the original run of ~19 issues was about at the halfway point, and they certainly couldn’t carry on from these. So it’s understandable, but that doesn’t make the collected edition any more readable.

So there you go: It’s a series that has some absolutely fabulous sequences here and there, and seemed to be going somewhere interesting, but we’ll never know. But those fabulous sequences are still stunning.

CM writes in The Comics Journal #122, page 23:

JUST IN.
As the Journal went to press a EX)ten-
tially new conflict arose between AV
and Diamond. Dave Sim, speaking to
an assembly of retailers at the Capital
City conference held in Madison,
Wisconson, May 8-10, Stated that he;
along with II other self-publishing
creators, are considering a boycott of
Diamorxi Distributors. The matter will
v be voted upon amongst the 12 in
Toronto, OntariO in early July. Sim
identified the roster of self-publishing
creators along with himself as: his
assistant on Cerebus Gerhard; the
creators of the Teenage Mutant Ninja
Tartlés Kevin Eastman and Peter
Laird; Puma Blues creators Michael
Zulli and Stephen Murphy; the editors
of AV’s uExoming Taboo Steve Bissette
and John Totleben; Bill Sienkiewicz
and Alan Moore, who are publishing
through Moore’s new imprint Mad
Love; and Dave Gibbons and Frank
Miller who are rumored to be
collaborating On a. project for self-
publication.
Sim said that when he took an in;
formal poll amongst the 12 asking if
‘they uOuld boycott Diamond given the
decision that day, only a minority said
they would not.
The Journal will have full details of
the reaction to this announcement next?
-issue.

I don’t think that ever happened.

Heidi MacDonald writes in Amazing Heroes #145, page 182:

You know you’re in the ’80s when: a
comic book that’s militantly pro-
environment and which loudly questions
the political status quo becomes the
center of a storm of contrwersy—but not
because of its contents, but rather
because of an arcane dispute over
magazine distribution.
Although Puma Blues creators have
made peace with Steve Geppi, and the
book was technically never dropped by
Diamond, there are still some hard
feelings around (mainly from AV-I •I
publisher Dave Sim).• Writer Steven
Murphy felt somewhat more at peace,
however. He reports that he and Geppi
have spoken at length, and Murphy has
accepted Geppi’s Still, it’s no
fun being a pawn in a larger game,
Murphy points out.
“It felt like shit for months,” he says.
He explains that if Diamond had
Puma Blues it would have meant
a third reduction in the creator’s income
on the “From mid-January to mid-
March was horrible. I couldn’t live with
a third cut in pay. We were really
sweating it out. I just speak for myself
not Michael, but I’ve always been one
who never gave a crap about what was
going on in the industry. I mean, I got
mad about injustice, but I wasn’t really
part of it. But this thrust me into the
middle of it all. It cost a tremendous
amount of creativity. All we did was talk
about it.”
But at present, everything is “cool
between Diamond and Puma Blues. It’s
no longer a controversy [andJ • I’m not
very emotional about it at this point. A
few months were hell, they were awful,
now we’re getting into working on it
again, we don’t have to worry about
phone calls in the middle of the night.”
However, #20 will be double-sized
“benefit book” of sorts, with contribu-
tions by Steve Bissette, Chester Brown,
Dan Day, Gerhard, Keith Giffen, Mike
Grell, Peter Laird, Frank Miller, Alan
Moore, David Roman, Arn Saba, Dave
Sim, Rick Veitch, Steve Fiorilla, Tom
Sutton, and many others, as well as a
story by the regular team. Veitch, Miller,
and Moore all contribute stories of one
sort or another. “Gerhard does some-
thing—I’m not sure what,” Murphy
quips.
Meanwhile, in the regular story line,
starting in #21, Gavia goes on leave for
a weekend, so “he’s in town, on the
town.” This four-issue story will reveal
a lot more about the world of Puma
Blues. “He’s away from the resevoir, but
a lot happens that will affect him when
he returns to the reservoir. He comes
back from leave to a real mess.”
All of the subplots are building to
reach a climax in the early 30s. The
series will be wrapping up with issue
#36.
Although it’s meant a lot of stress for
him personally, Murphy feels that there
may be a worthwhile result to all of the
controversy, in that the creative com-
munity is banding together. “It’s amazing
the support we’ve gotten,” he says of the
benefit book. “If creators can get
together it would be worthwhile. That’s
the good thing that’s going to come out
of this. [We’re] going through a pro-
longed period of redefining people’s
roles.”

Gary Groth interviews Dave Sim in The Comics Journal #130, page 101:

GROVH: Before Iforget, Bhy wus a benefit book publish-
ed when there was no loss?
SIM: Because it was already set in motion for one thing,
and cellainly everybody appreciated that a book like Puma
Blues was probably worth supporting from the ecological
standpoint. I think, “Look at the list of contributors; we’re
all the classic liberals of the field. We want to seea book
like Puma Blues prosper.” It ended up costing quite a lot
of money because the wrong price went on the cover.
GRUI’H: Oh, Jesus. A lower price?
SIM: It was priced like a regular issue and it was sup-
posed to be twice that. So basically everybody got a real
deal on it.
GROTH: Who’s fault was that, the publisher’s or the
creators ‘ ?
SIM: That’s one Of those real funny areas I created by
giving complete autonomous control to the creators. They
didn’t tell Preney to change the price on the cover, and
Karen didn’t either. It’s up to me whichever one I want
to blame.
GRMH: [laughs] O.K.
SIM: So, consequently, I didn’t blame anybody and I Of-
fered to pay them the royalties they would have gotten if
the right price had gotten on the cover, which they declined
and then wanted to use a certain amount of revenues they
would have gotten on it to Offset the losses that I incur-
red, so we’ve got a real Alphonse and Gaston act going
on here with the bowing back and forth. I’ve ended up
deferring to them because they’re the creators, but it still
feels to me that they’re out. I think it worked out to about
S2000 that they lost, and they figure I’m out about
$1500

Geez!

Heidi MacDonald writes in The Comics Journal #112, page 35:

Jesus, the year 2000 is only 14 years away,
although such mathematical platitudes
usually strike mc as being overlay disin-
genuous. This book is plenty odd and
plenty interesting. Murphy’s scripting runs
into the self-indulgent (but what else would
one expect of an A1 International book?),
and it’s as uneven as all first issues are (the
conversation between Immer and his
mother near the end really strains to be
strained, if you know what mean). Zulli
shows the signs of coming from a fine arts
background—too much rendering, not
enough white space—but it’s really quite
lovely in many spots, and the puma of the
title is beautiful enough to break your heart.
Zulli and Murphy need to loosen up a bit,
but allowing for first issue jitters and all, this
is definitely a book to watch.

Somebody writes in The Comics Journal #113, page 52:

Stephen
Murphy’s script for the first issue doesn’t
take us too far into whatever plot may
emerge—the focus is essentially on exposi-
tion, though more questions are raised than
answered—but his storytelling skills may
prove to be considerable. (He certainly
doesn’t pander to the reader: there are tan-
talizing bits and pieces of the future intro-
duced, and it’s up to the reader to assemble
some sort of meaning.) Murphy and artist
Michael Zulli have worked out some beauti•
fully visual passages in this first issue of the
series, which promises to deal with the
ecological balance Of looking for-
ward to the second issue…

Heidi MacDonald writes in The Comics Journal #116, page 54:

And speaking of self-indulgent,
we come to Puma Blues. Writer
Steve Murphy and artist Michael
Zulli are -still decidedly feeling
their way here. (And everyone
knows the lettering in early issues
was… urn, very bad, but certainly
not deserving of Don Thompson’s
screed in CBG.) Zulli’s wildlife art
is utterly breathtaking—the all-
animal story in #5 is probably the
best single issue to date. Zulli
manages to show animal expres-
sions without anthropomorphizing
them—no mean feat. And
Murphy’s concern for the environ-
ment is clearly genuine. There’s all
sorts of intriguing concepts and
situations floating around here.
And yet they’re still casting
about for a story. As of this writing
we’ve had six issues Of mood and
next to nothing to put in it. Still,
in an interview, Murphy was quite
aware of the problems the book is
having with plotlessness and prom-
ised to get things back into focus.
If they do get things under control’
Puma Blues could very well live up
to its potential. If not.. .well, you
know I’m a big softy for noble
experiments that fail.

This person doesn’t seem to have actually read the collection:

Plus, of course, the brand new 40-page conclusion by Murphy and Zulli. Now that it’s done The Puma Blues can take its rightful place alongside the period’s other great monuments, such as Moore and Campbell’s From Hell and Gaiman’s Sandman. Without it, any well-stocked comics library should be considered incomplete.

I’m guessing “nothing”:

I don’t want to say too much about the ending just yet, until more people have had a chance to read it, but I will say that it’s mostly satisfying. Not completely, but a 40 page story to complete what would probably have been 260 or more pages was never going to be, and Murphy and Zulli are obviously in a completely different place now. There are a lot of elements in the new pages which couldn’t have been in the original plans, references to real-world events of the last quarter century, and I’d be fascinated to know how much of the overall arc of the finale was in the original plans.

Most reviewers of the new edition doesn’t seem to have read it:

What I don’t remember in enough detail is the series itself so I confess that this is more of a dim recollection than a review. I don’t have time to re-read five hundred and fifty pages at this time of year.

I know, it’ll take several hours to read…

Anyway!

This blog post is part of the Renegades and Aardvarks series.